Audience feedback from those in class

We also got people in class to watch the trailer and give us feedback. This will further our knowledge of what needs to be improved so that we can get our trailer to look as professional as possible. This is what they said:

• The shots later in the trailer need to be in the following order: Frances and Jon dancing, Frances running down the corridor, the nightmare scene, Frances running outside, the title shown as she runs down the steps, followed by the institutional information and then the fire after this, as the music fades.
• Either cut/straighten the shot of Frances running to the lake
• Zoom in on the titles of the newspaper clippings
• Alter some of the text so that the storyline is clear
• The match being dropped needs to be nearer the end of the trailer

We will try our best to make sure that each of these changes is made, but we are aware that the trailer needs to be completed shorty, so will put in as much time as we can to prepare our final trailer.